Oh i continued off my old story.
Vampire A kills Vampire B’s family. Angered Vampire B tries to kill Vampire A but is pushed off the boat. He falls in the water and tries to swim to land; he is completely lost until a human girl human girl finds him and nurses him to health. He see esthe human girl resembles the girl from his past that he loved, but ignores that idea saying that its his imagination. She sees that he’s awake and asks him what happened to him. He says that an evil vampire killed his family and he is set on revenge. When he is completly nursed back to health he says his thanks then leaves. The girl leaves also to go to work. He goes on looking for Vampire A until he hears a scream, he runs toward the scream and finds the human girl drenched in blood and surrounded by vampires. He defeats them all and takes the girl to the hospital, Vampire B knocks on the door and asks her why she was attacked. She tells him that her dad was half vampire and her mom was a powerful preistess, so her blood has special powers that can make vampires really powerful. There was a moment of silence before Vampire B said that he would protect her from the vampires. She smiles and says she will try to help him on his revenge and falls unconcious from losing to much blood.
(1 week later)
The human girl was out of the hostpital, she was now living with Vampire B since her parents had died when she was little. Vampire had told her that they had to leave soon to go find vampire A. Right now they were at the mall, where the human girl was picking out new outfits and she had made Vampire B pick which outfit looked best on her. Her old outfit had been ruined by the vampires, it gave her chills just thinking about it, and she could feel the sore spots on her back of where the vampires had attacked. She went into a deep thought, she knew that the vampires had been after her blood, when she was little they would follow her around but never attack. so why now what was so different now. Still in deep thought Vampire B yelled out, she quickly came out. She was wearing a long flowing skirt with a tank top. Vampire B blushed, but tried to hide as she finished her twirl. Everything she did resembled the girl that he loved. She asked how she looked, he turned around while blushing and said it was fine. She smiled and they left the store and headed on their journey.
To be continued.
So is it good any ideas would be helpful.